Ryan Anderson

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The Gallbladder Saga: Part 2

I survived surgery! I’m now about a month out from surgery so as promised in my previous post, here’s a second post to share the lead-up to and recovery period after gallbladder surgery! Again this will include a lot of detail to hopefully help others who are going through this, but also to share my experience with anyone who knows me and is curious.

Warning: This post will be more gross that the last one, and will include pictures of surgical incisions, my giant gallstone, and discussion of gross medical stuff including poop. Read at your own risk!

The Gastroenterologist

I didn’t actually get to speak with a gastroenterologist doctor until 4 days before the surgery. Last fall, after my ultrasound, my GP referred me to the gastroenterology office, and I met with the Physician’s Assistant (PA) there. She is the one who recommended a HIDA scan and upper GI x-ray series. After the HIDA scan, I reported back that it triggered a gallbladder attack that evening, and based on that and the discomfort I felt she referred me to surgery.

Meanwhile, I had to go back and forth with the gastroenterology office about the upper GI x-ray because they kept asking me why I hadn’t done it yet and I kept telling them that they were referring me to a place that doesn’t have the equipment to do that imaging. I finally had the imaging done in January, and I had to share the radiologist’s report back to gastroenterology myself because apparently doctor’s offices just are incapable of communicating with each other. The imaging was negative, but I asked to do a follow up with someone from gastroenterology anyway because I had some lingering questions that I wanted to ask prior to surgery.

Twice they scheduled me to meet with someone, only to realize that the person didn’t take my insurance, so they had to push back the appointment. Finally they tried to schedule me out into June and I told them, no, my surgery is May 10 and I want to speak to someone before that. (Remember, this is the office that referred me to surgery, they should have known that I had surgery scheduled, but apparently the surgeon’s office didn’t tell them) They finally squeezed me in with the actual doctor on May 6. I feel that it is worth mentioning that when I showed up on the 6th for my appointment, they still didn’t know why I was there. The nurse asked me “So, you’re here for GERD?” (Gastroesophageal reflux disease – which is my official diagnosis for my reflux issues). I had to remind them that, no, I am here to talk about gallbladder surgery which I am having in 4 days, because your office recommended it.

At this point, I was pretty much sure of surgery: my gallbladder had been acting up over the last month much more than usual, which was actually reassuring about the right course of action, and I had read the research that said large stones come with an increased cancer risk. But I had a bunch of questions about the specifics of my symptoms, and I was also just looking for some reassurance. I’ll go through the questions that I asked and his answers (feel free to skip ahead to where I talk about surgery if you don’t want to read all of this):

Why are my attacks so intermittent?

He said that larger stones often have very intermittent symptoms – sometimes they shift and block things, other times they don’t. Whereas small stones can actually get stuck in the duct, so that you get immediate and extreme pain.

For a long time I mistook my rare attacks for bad gas because they do come with gas. Why would a gallbladder attack be associated with gas?

Basically he said you get gas when undigested stuff gets farther down your digestive tract where bacteria can break it down. So whether it’s fiber, or lactose (if you’re lactose intolerant), or fat if your gallbladder is not releasing bile properly, that can be a source of gas.

A few years ago I changed my diet to have more fiber and it seemed to reduce the frequency of attacks. Likewise I’ve notice that when I’m on vacation and eating out all the time and having a lot of fatty food but also walking around a lot, I usually don’t have attacks. Could gut motility be related to gallbladder attacks?

He was pretty skeptical of this, and suggested that it pointed to a possible overlap between gallbladder issues and IBS issues. He also said that having symptoms 3+ hours after eating sounds a lot more like IBS than gallbladder.

For what it’s worth, I think he’s wrong on this. I think there is a difference between “textbook” gallbladder attacks caused by small stones blocking the bile duct and large-stone gallbladder attacks that are more of a cramping or spasm due to the gallbladder having to work too hard to release bile around a big fat stone. This isn’t just a hunch, the HIDA scan showed pretty clearly that my attacks are a delayed gallbladder reaction. I had only mild discomfort when they injected the CCK during the scan, but that evening I had an attack because my gallbladder was fatigued and started spasming.

What should the HIDA scan feel like for someone without gallbladder issues?

He said that for people with normally functioning gallbladders, there should be little to no discomfort, so the fact that during the scan I was saying that “maybe” I was feeling something similar to my attacks, that suggests there’s an issue. When I asked why I would have an attack later that night though, he literally said “That one, I think I’m gonna have to take a pass.” But again, I personally think it’s the distinction between textbook gallbladder attacks and large-stone or hyperactivity attacks.

My HIDA scan showed an EF of 79%, could that be thrown off by having a large stone taking up a lot of volume in the gallbladder?

He seemed skeptical of this idea but I’m not sure I explained it very well. Basically, my thought was that if I have a big golf ball taking up half the volume of my gallbladder, then if my gallbladder ejects a large fraction of its available volume, maybe that is equivalent in terms of bile released to a gallbladder without stones ejecting a smaller fraction. And likely having to work a lot harder to do so. That might be an explanation for why I have digestive symptoms of having too little bile but a high EF.

He also briefly mentioned the relatively new diagnosis of “hyperkinetic” gallbladder, which is generally considered to be EF of 80% or higher, so I would be right on the borderline. He said that there isn’t a lot of data about that yet, but bottom line you can have issues if you’re releasing too much or too little bile.

My suspicion is that my gallbladder was sort of “acting” hyperkinetic because the large stone made it have to work too hard to release enough bile.

I read that something like 10% of people have “post-cholecystectomy syndrome” with long-term digestive problems.

He said that 10% sounds like a “fantastically high” number, and that likely what happens is that in the medical literature, there is a bias toward over-reporting because it’s better to report something that is unrelated than to not report something that is related. In other words, false positives are better than false negatives. So he said that it’s more rare than the literature would suggest.

But he also said that diarrhea after fatty meals is not uncommon, especially in the first couple of months, and that some people if they continue to have issues take medication pre-emptively if they know they are going to have a fatty meal, similar to how someone who is lactose intolerant might take a pill if they know their upcoming meal will have lactose in it.

I have a family history of Crohns/Ulcerative Colitis, and I’ve read that having the gallbladder out can increase risk for intestinal cancers, should I be scheduling a colonoscopy sooner than usual?

His answer on this was kind of unclear, he basically said that if he had seen me earlier, he would have ordered an endoscopy and colonoscopy before going forward with surgery, just to have a full picture of what is going on in my upper and lower GI. But then he also said that I can probably wait until age 45 before doing a colonoscopy. So I’ll probably bring this up with my GP when I go back to him for a regular checkup and see if I should get checked sooner.

All in all, although I got some answers to my questions, I was disappointed with this visit with the gastroenterologist. I was hoping for more reassurance about surgery, but instead got a noncommittal “yeah, you should probably do the surgery, but don’t be surprised if it doesn’t fix everything”. I also didn’t love the apparent tendency to diagnose everything as IBS when the HIDA results indicated pretty clearly that it was my gallbladder even if the reaction was delayed from what it is “supposed to” be. I really did not appreciate the statements about “well, if I had seen you sooner, I would have ordered XYZ additional tests before going forward with surgery.” As if I had not been seen by his own physician’s assistant 6 months ago, as if this last minute appointment was my fault and not the fault of his office’s scheduling incompetence.

Anyway, let’s get on with the surgery.

Surgery Prep

In the lead up to surgery, the main things that needed to be done were a pre-op phone call, some blood work, and washing with special soap. The pre-op phone call was simple enough, they just asked me about medical history and what medications I was taking, and gave instructions about what I could eat when. I had just received a pre-surgery info packet in the mail when they called, and there were some differences in instructions. An important one was that the packet said no food or drink after midnight, but the nurse on the phone said that clear liquids were fine up until a couple hours before check in. This meant I could have some apple juice the morning of the surgery to keep my blood sugar up.

The pre-op bloodwork was super easy, just walked into the lab, they took one vial of blood (thankfully, I got a skilled tech and barely even felt the needle), and they handed over the packet with pre-op instructions and the special soap.

The soap was pretty weird. You have to use it the night before surgery and the morning of surgery. Each time, you’re supposed to thoroughly wash yourself with regular soap, then turn off the water and wash with the special hospital soap that feels and smells like a combination of hand soap and hand sanitizer. Then wash yourself again with it without rinsing! Then finally rinse. The idea is to super thoroughly disinfect your skin to reduce the chances of infection. I doubt I’ve ever been cleaner than the morning of my surgery!

Surgery: Pre-Op

My surgery was scheduled for 12:30pm, so I had a relaxed start to the day. We got the kids off to school, went for a walk, then I did my shower with super-soap and changed into my comfy day-of-surgery clothes. I got some supplies set up for my recovery “nest” by the couch in the den, picked out some possible low-fat meals to eat during recovery, and then it was time to go.

At the hospital, we checked in and I was given a tracking beacon (which I handed off to the pre-op nurse) which would automatically update my status, so my wife could tell where I was in the process just by looking at screens posted around the hospital, so for example if she wanted she could go get lunch in the cafeteria and tell when I got out of surgery. Pretty cool, though we didn’t need it too much.

The nurse led us back to the pre-op area where I had to change into the very stylish hospital gown, socks, and hairnet. They even had a pre-heated blanket to get under!

Ready to go! So relaxed.

They did the usual height, weight, blood pressure stuff, and got me set up with an IV. My veins are easy to see under my skin, so you would think I would be easy for stuff like blood draws and IVs, but I think I am often dehydrated, and my veins tend to slip away from the needle so I’ve had issues in the past. Unfortunately, the restrictions on eating and drinking before surgery didn’t help with this, and my main nurse was unable to get a good vein despite some painful digging around. She ended up calling over a different nurse armed with an ultrasound machine. Even with the ultrasound they had to poke around a bit, but finally they got the IV placed and secured. In retrospect, I should have hydrated a lot more while I was allowed to before surgery to help with placing the IV.

The lull while we waited for the ultrasound to show up was the perfect opportunity to ask the question that was most on my mind during pre-op: Can I please keep my giant gallstone? (And could they please take some pictures of my gross gallbladder after removal?) The nurse asked around and told us that likely they would have to send everything to pathology and then I could pick it up from pathology in a couple of days.

Then there was a bunch of paperwork to sign to show that I was who I said I was, that I understood what surgery I was there for, the associated risks, etc. The anesthesiologist came by and I talked to him for a bit about potential nausea, and he gave me some medication ahead of time and adjusted the IV medication to hopefully prevent nausea afterward (I was worried about throwing up with fresh incisions in my abdomen). He said that nausea from anesthesia tends to correlate with how prone to motion sickness you are. I am not very prone to motion sickness, and I ended up having basically no nausea after my surgery or from my pain meds so this seems to be anecdotally true.

Then the surgeon came by and did a quick rundown of what the surgery involves, where the incisions will be, and what to expect for recovery. He asked if I had any questions and I felt like I should have some, but didn’t so he went off to get ready.

There was a lot of waiting around. My surgery was slightly delayed because the previous surgery took a little longer than planned, but even if we had been on time, there’s a good amount of down time. I was worried that I was going to be super-anxious on the day of surgery but I was actually not too bad. Because I am a huge dork, I kept thinking of this line from Lord of the Rings:

“Things are now in motion that cannot be undone.” – Gandalf

Essentially, all of the decision making and researching and worrying was done, so on the day of surgery it was just my job to show up and go with the flow.

I have had a very similar feeling before when a major milestone or event is coming, and at a certain point you just have to kind of surrender to the passage of time and accept that it’s going to happen. I got this for major deadlines and milestones in school (such as qualifying exams, PhD defense, etc), and I still get it sometimes for work deadlines. At the end it’s just a sort of relief: “well, this thing is going to happen and then it will be over.”

The main thing I felt while sitting around waiting on the day of surgery was not so much anxiety but a surreal feeling. It’s just really hard to mentally accept that in an hour, someone is going to cut holes in your abdomen and remove an organ and then supposedly you’re just going to go home and be fine in a week. This was part of the reason I asked them to not only let me keep the stone, but take a picture of my gallbladder once it was out. Just a little additional piece of evidence to say “yes, that is a thing that actually happened, they really did cut that thing out of me.”

Surgery

Finally the time came for surgery. They wheeled my bed out of the pre-op area, let me hug my wife goodbye, and then wheeled me down the hall to the Operating Room. Along the way, they kept me talking, making small talk about being a scientist and that maybe one of the nurses had seen my public talks in years past. Pretty obviously doing their best to keep me distracted. As we chatted, one of the nurses pushed some medication into my IV which made me extremely sleepy in a matter of a minute or so.

I only saw the operating room briefly. My main impression was that there was a ton of equipment in there, including giant TV monitors showing test patterns. I was too out of it to really understand at the time, but in retrospect those must have been the screens they used to view the video feed from the laparoscopic camera. I also was struck by how many people were involved in the surgical team. I am not sure what I expected, but there’s really a whole team involved, it’s not just one surgeon and one nurse.

They wheeled my pre-op bed up right next to the surgical table, and I had to shuffle myself over onto the table. At that point I was already quite out of it. I remember being surprised at how irresistibly heavy my eyelids were, and trying my hardest to open my eyes and just being unable to do so. They told me they were giving me some oxygen with a mask and I remember thinking “this mask is on crooked” and that’s all.

Post-Op

Next thing I knew, I was back in the pre-op area, waking up from what felt like a very deep sleep. My wife was there, as was a nurse or two. My memories of the immediate post-op period are very hazy, but pretty soon after I woke up I know my wife was excitedly telling me that she had my stone! No delay for pathology, they popped the big gross stone in a sample jar and gave it to her! There were also some pictures of my gallbladder in my body, after removal, and after the stone was removed, all taken with the laparoscopic camera. They also said that I apparently had a few more smaller stones that were hidden by the big one on the ultrasound (this was apparently not accurate, no other stones were listed on the pathology report when I got it at my follow up appointment).

Ok, are you ready for gross pictures?

Last chance to turn back!

Top Left: Gallbladder in place in my body, with cameo appearance by my liver on the left plus some fat and other stuff.
Top Right and Bottom Left: Gallbladder after removal, you can see the stone is lodged in the neck.
Bottom Right: Stone removed from the gallbladder.

My post-op pathology report said that my gallbladder showed signs of “chronic and acute inflammation” but thankfully no indication of “neoplasms” (i.e. cancerous growths).

The stone in all its disgusting glory. It was initially pretty uniformly dark, but has gradually gotten more of a mottled appearance.
My incisions, the day after surgery. The bandaid is covering a second hole like the one farther to my right, plus a tiny pinprick hole. It’s just there because there was some leakage around the glue – I didn’t come home from the hospital with the bandaid. Apparently the big incision under my sternum was a bit larger than typical because of the large stone. I am amazed by how little pain or bruising I have had. (the orange tint to my skin above the top incision is from the pre-surgery scrub they use to disinfect before starting)

There was not much to post-op. Nurses came by and gave us instructions about recovery, what to do and not to do. (Do not: overdose on painkillers, lift heavy objects; Do: walk as much as you’re able, stay hydrated, eat bland food at first) My incisions were all glued shut, so there was essentially no wound care to worry about. They basically said just don’t soak in the tub (showers ok) and let them come loose naturally in a couple of weeks. (I am now 1 month post op and the final bits of glue just came off this week)

I had read about people in recovery having to stay until they showed that they could walk, or until they urinated, but I don’t remember any such tests. They basically gave us our instructions, had me change back into my clothes, and sent us home. I was wheeled out to the curb in a wheelchair and then climbed into the car and we went home.

Recovery: Pain

I remember very little of the rest of that day. I think basically I took pain meds and slept.

I was and am surprised by how little my incisions hurt. The most incision pain was from the large one under my sternum where they took the gallbladder out, and the general path from there to where the gallbladder was. Presumably that’s where the most internal bruising and damage occurred. All the rest of my incisions have been pretty darn near painless.

More painful than any of the incisions was the gas pain. I had read about this beforehand, but it’s very strange. Basically, when they do laparoscopic surgery, they need to be able to see what they’re doing inside your body, so they kind of inflate you with carbon dioxide. At the end of surgery, they expel as much of this as possible, but there’s often a bit left. This left over CO2 can irritate the phrenic nerve, which is the nerve that controls your diaphragm. This nerve connects to the spinal cord up in your neck, and so when it gets irritated by gas, even though the gas is in your abdomen, the pain can manifest in the right shoulder. For me it was behind the right collarbone and for the first couple of days it was a pretty persistent and unpleasant ache.

Right shoulder pain after surgery is because the nerve that connects your spine to the diaphragm also extends into the right shoulder. This entire gallbladder experience has been one big argument against intelligent design.

Even though I knew it wasn’t actually something wrong with my shoulder, I kept rubbing it as if it were a tense muscle or a cramp that might go away. I had heard that walking helped with gas pain so I took a very slow and uncomfortable walk around the neighborhood but it didn’t seem to help all that much. Maybe it actually did help the gas dissipate, but at the time it felt like it just made the pain worse because I had to breathe harder.

I found that I was most comfortable sitting in a recliner with a bed pillow across my abdomen and an electric heating pad around my shoulders. Sometimes, I would put an ice pack under the pillow on my abdomen to keep swelling down.

Between the gas pain and the pain from the big incision, I had trouble taking a deep breath for the first couple of days but once the gas dissipated and I had healed a bit I felt much better. If I hadn’t gotten sick I would have been feeling pretty good by day 3 or 4.

Strep Throat? Really?!

That’s right, about three days into my recovery, I came down with strep throat. At first I was afraid I was getting a cough, which would have been very painful for my incisions. But instead, it developed into the worst case of strep throat I’ve ever had. Very quickly, my tonsils were far more painful than anything relating to my surgery. Like being stabbed in the throat every time I swallowed even saliva or water. At the peak, I woke up in the night in significant pain and with a fever. I was quite grateful that I had pain medication from the surgery, which I took at night to help fall asleep with the strep throat. My 4 year old also came down with strep at the same time, which for him manifested as a sore throat and vomiting. My poor wife was stuck taking care of a vomiting child and a useless sick adult. She is the best.

I don’t know if the strep is something my kid brought home from preschool and it just wiped me out because I was already weak from surgery, or if it’s something that I caught at the hospital and brought home. In any case, another lesson learned is to wash hands super well after being at the hospital because you really don’t need to get sick while recovering.

When I went to the doctor for the strep, they warned me that the test can take a long time to show a positive result, like 20 minutes. 5 minutes later the doctor came in and said “yeah, your test is already clearly positive. The nurses are very impressed.” The bright side of having strep is that it responds pretty quickly once you get medication. It still took nearly a week to feel all the way better as my throat healed but the worst of it was over in a couple days once I had some antibiotics.

Recovery: Sleep

Back to surgery recovery. I was really worried that sleeping on my back instead of my side would be really difficult but I didn’t actually have much trouble. I held a second normal bed pillow across my abdomen and rested my hands on top and was able to sleep decently. I was generally just very tired, usually going to bed early and waking up early, and taking naps in the afternoon. I sometimes napped back in my bed, but also often dozed off while reclining on the couch. Between the surgery and the sickness, my body was just wiped out.

Recovery: Food and Digestion

TMI warning: This section is going to talk about poop. It’s kind of an unavoidable topic when it comes to gallbladder issues and surgery.

One of the main things I have been worried about with this surgery has been whether I would be trading being able to eat anything I want with only rare (once or twice a year) pain, for a lifetime of low-fat food and chronic diarrhea. At about two weeks post-op I was feeling pretty good and thought I could basically go back to normal, but unfortunately I’ve gotten worse since then.

In terms of food, I tried to take it very slow, starting off with things like white rice, plain bread with honey (no butter), low-fat soups, applesauce, bananas, etc. I also stayed hydrated with a lot of gatorade and water. Slowly, I graduated up to small servings of low fat meals like chicken breast, tuna, etc. My appetite was pretty low for a while after surgery, which I think is normal. Being unable to swallow anything without pain due to strep kind of messed up my progress and I was living off soft stuff like broth, soups, applesauce, and yogurt for a while, but once that cleared up, I started slowly adding fat back in and for a little while was fully back to normal.

I was given stool softeners to take to counteract the constipating effects of anesthesia and narcotics, and they told me to start taking them immediately the day of surgery. It took a few days for my digestive system to “wake up” and once it did I did have diarrhea and soft stools for maybe a week. Then as I shifted my diet back to normal, I was back to normal for about a week and was optimistic that I had avoided the chronic diarrhea that I had heard about.

Unfortunately that brief period of feeling normal was temporary. I now always have loose stools and gas and have to go to the bathroom urgently within 30-60 minutes of eating. The most confusing thing is that I also get the urge to go sometimes when I don’t actually have to. Apparently all of this is due to the effects of the constant trickle of bile into my intestines. Bile acts to stimulate the gut to contract and also causes fluids to be released into the intestine – the result is a laxative effect.

I’m still experimenting with diet to see if I can make things better, but so far it’s very hard to figure out. All the advice out there says to stick with low fat, but if there’s too much bile, it seems like I would want to eat some fat to “use it up”. There is also advice that you should eat more frequent, smaller meals, so I am going to be trying that out in the coming days. Basically a Hobbit system: Breakfast, second breakfast, afternoon tea, dinner, supper, etc.

Conclusion

All in all, the surgery and recovery were much easier than I anticipated. I am really amazed at how well the incisions have healed. One of the holes is taking a little longer because there is a bit of the internal stitches sticking out, but it’s not painful, just a little itchy. My abdominal muscles are almost entirely back to normal, though I have been trying to be careful. Lately I have been having some more aches and pains in the gallbladder area, so I’m not sure if that is still some healing going on or if it is due to the digestive issues.

A couple weeks ago I was very optimistic about the digestive recovery, but now I am less so. The thing I was most worried about with this surgery was that I would go from being able to eat anything with only rare symptoms to having constant diarrhea and having to stick to low-fat foods. So far it is looking like the latter is exactly what is happening, which is very disappointing. I’ve heard that this is pretty normal for the first couple of months so for now it’s just a matter of experimenting with diet and hoping that things improve.

The Gallbladder Saga: Part 1

On May 10, 2024, I am having surgery to remove my gallbladder.

It has been a long road of figuring out symptoms, trying to rule out other causes, learning, and indecision. Writing this all out is a way for me to process everything, to tell friends and family what’s going on, and hopefully provide useful information for others out there who may be in a similar situation. This is going to be long, but hopefully interesting and useful to someone.

I am NOT an expert, I’m just a scientist with gallbladder issues who has read way too much about this stuff to satisfy my own anxiety/curiosity. Please talk to a doctor if you are having similar problems.

Before we get any farther: heads up that this post will include frank discussion of digestive symptoms, medical conditions, and generally gross body stuff that some may consider to be Too Much Information. I’ll try to keep it relatively tame, but if you don’t want to read about this sort of thing, stop now!

History and Symptoms

I would start at the beginning, but it’s unclear when exactly that was. For many years I have occasionally suffered from very painful digestive symptoms. The first of these “attacks” that I remember occurred on November 6, 2012. I recall the exact date because it was election day. I was driving back to Arizona from California where I had been doing operations for the Curiosity Mars rover. It’s a long drive, so I spent the day sedentary in the car and eating fast food. That evening at home, as election results were coming, I was lying on the floor suffering from what I thought was a painful bout of gas.

Over the years this would happen occasionally with varying severity, and each time I just figured it was bad gas. I usually could (and did, and do!) eat whatever fatty food I wanted, but sometimes when I ate a large/heavy meal, especially if that meal also included a few alcoholic drinks, and especially if I was mostly inactive that day, I would end up triggering what I now know was a form of gallbladder attack.

Part of why it took so long to figure out what was happening is that my pain is usually not easy to localize. Often gallbladder attacks are described as a sharp stabbing pain in the upper right abdomen right where the gallbladder is. For me, it starts with “epigastric” cramping across the front of my abdomen, under the ribcage. As the intensity ramps up, the pain spreads to the upper middle of my back, like the muscles between my shoulder blades are extremely tense but no amount of stretching or rubbing can relax them. Often, it’s the inexplicable upper back tenseness that really clues me in that an attack is coming. There’s an irresistible urge to move, walk, stretch, anything to find a comfortable position, but there is no comfortable position. At the peak of an attack, I’m rolling on the floor, sweating, shaking, and generally miserable. During my worst attacks, my hands and arms went all tingly. The only things that slightly help are walking and a hot shower or bath. And to further confuse things, the attacks don’t just feel like gas, they are accompanied by gas and bloating. They tend to occur in the evening and last most of the night (one memorable attack had me awake and wandering the neighborhood moaning in pain like some deranged zombie all night on Christmas eve), subsiding in the morning. After an attack, it tends to take a day or so for my digestion to normalize. It’s almost like whatever happens completely shuts down my digestive tract and it needs time to reset and start working again.

A few years ago the symptoms were happening often enough that I changed my diet, cutting out all alcohol for several months, and switching from bagels and cream cheese to raisin bran for breakfast. This seemed to help, and even now that I do drink alcohol again, I usually only have problems once or twice a year.

In the last couple of years, I’ve also started to have symptoms of reflux. Often not traditional heartburn, but when my stomach is full and I do something like a plank or bend over or exert myself I can feel my stomach contents “overflow” and start moving up my esophagus. Rarely, after a really big meal, I’ll sometimes wake up at night on the verge of vomiting, but without nausea. Just… overflowing. (I know, it’s weird and gross) For a long time I’ve also often had to clear my throat a lot after eating (my dad does this too, so it’s likely some combination of our particular biology and learned behavior). Recently I’ve noticed that I need to do it more and that I’m increasingly prone to losing my voice if I talk a lot. Altogether, my reflux symptoms are most consistent with something called “silent reflux” or laryngopharyngeal reflux (LPR).

It’s unclear if this reflux stuff is related to my gallbladder issues or not but I’m quite curious to see if it changes after surgery.

Doctors and Tests

For a long time, I didn’t really go to the doctor, ever. I was young and healthy and didn’t see the need. But I’m almost 40 now, so last year I finally set up an appointment to establish care with a general practitioner. At the appointment, as I discussed my health history with my doctor, I mentioned these rare but severe bouts of pain. I said that I was pretty sure they were just gas, but figured it was worth mentioning. He ordered blood work and an abdominal ultrasound just to be safe.

At my follow up appointment with him after the ultrasound, he said (I didn’t actually get to see the images at this appointment) that it had come back showing “gallstones” and that he had referred me to a surgeon. This was shocking to me and seemed awfully drastic for something that only occasionally bothered me, so I told him I’d like to wait and see. (He also apparently had sent me a message that I missed about the gallstones and surgeon referral, so at the actual appointment I learned of all this from a casual remark along the lines of “So, you saw my message about the gallstones and the need for surgery…”) He agreed with holding off on surgery but recommended that I talk to a gastroenterologist about both the gallstones/abdominal pain and the reflux.

At the gastroenterologist, they listened to me describe my attacks, and said that it sounded consistent with gallbladder issues. (I have since learned that a whole host of GI symptoms can end up being gallbladder related.) They ordered two additional imaging tests to figure out what might be going on. The first is called a hepatobiliary iminodiacetic acid (HIDA) scan, and the second was an upper GI x-ray series with air contrast. I’ll describe the HIDA scan below, but first let’s review some basics.

What is a gallbladder? What is a gallstone?

The gallbladder is a small organ that sits just below the liver, in the upper right part of the abdomen. It’s a small sac (normally about 4 cm by 10 cm when full) that acts as a reservoir for bile, the chemical produced by the liver that helps break down fats in your food. When you eat a fatty meal, as that fat enters the upper portion of your intestines (the duodenum), it triggers the release of a hormone called cholecystokinin (CCK). CCK tells your gallbladder to contract, releasing bile through the bile duct into your duodenum to break down the fat.

BruceBlaus, CC BY-SA 4.0 https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0, via Wikimedia Commons

Most gallstones form when the bile in your gallbladder contains too much cholesterol (which can occur for various reasons) and it essentially crystalizes and precipitates out as a solid. Some gallstones are “pigment stones” and are formed from bilirubin and salts that occur in bile. These are less common than cholesterol stones.

Gallstones cause problems because they block the bile duct, so when your body tells the gallbladder to contract, it does, but nothing happens. So it tries harder, and harder, essentially going into a self-destructive muscle spasm, and then you’re in excruciating pain. Small stones can actually get lodged in the bile duct, or even end up blocking the liver or pancreas which is a life-threatening emergency. Likewise, the gallbladder can become necrotic or burst, which is also life-threatening.

Larger stones are too big to fit through the bile duct (which is normally pretty tiny, just a few mm), so in some ways are safer than small stones, but can cause chronic inflammation of the gallbladder that can lead to significantly increased risk of gallbladder cancer, especially for stones larger than 3 cm.

Usually, gallstones are diagnosed via ultrasound. They can also show up in x-rays and MRIs. Many people have gallstones that don’t cause any problems at all, but once they start to cause problems, the problems generally don’t go away.

What is a HIDA Scan?

A HIDA scan is a test that lets doctors see how well your gallbladder is functioning. It uses a radioactive tracer (technetium-99) that is injected into your bloodstream. The tracer is incorporated into a chemical that is processed by the liver and passed into the gallbladder in bile. The tracer emits a small amount of gamma rays that easily pass through the body and can be detected and turned into an image of your gallbladder.

Before the scan I was told not to eat anything so that my gallbladder would be full of bile. The scan usually has two parts. First, they inject the tracer and you lie still on the scanner (basically a firm bed with a large boxy device above your abdomen) for about an hour. This lets the tracer get passed from your blood, through the liver, into the gallbladder.

Next, you are given something to trigger the gallbladder to contract. For me, they used an injection of CCK. I’ve also heard of some places that just have you drink a fatty drink like Ensure.

Triggering the gallbladder can cause an attack, especially if you have a stone blocking the bile duct. I was worried I would be in excruciating pain, but for me it wasn’t as bad as a real attack. I felt a sort of fluttering feeling as the gallbladder contracted, followed by nausea and tightness and discomfort similar to my attacks but maybe 10% as bad. This lasted for about 10 minutes and then subsided.

By measuring how much signal is coming from the gallbladder before and after triggering it to contract, the radiology technician calculates the Ejection Fraction (EF). Basically, how much of the bile in your gallbladder gets squirted out when it is told to do its job. Generally an EF of less than 35% is considered low, and can be reason to have surgery even in the absence of stones.

Recent research is also starting to suggest that an EF that is too high (“hyperkinetic”) can cause problems. Basically, your gallbladder overreacts and spasms when stimulated, dumping too much bile and causing pain and inflammation along with other digestive issues. The threshold for what is considered “too high” an EF is not well defined, but generally around 80%.

One thing I learned in reading about it is that there’s a pretty large uncertainty in the EF measurement. Many people get hung up on the precise number but often the more important thing is not what the EF number was, but whether the scan replicates your symptoms. If you have issues when your gallbladder is stimulated to contract during the test, it stands to reason that your gallbladder is likely the problem.

What nobody told me was that the gallbladder activity triggered by the HIDA scan can cause digestive issues for a day or two afterward, even if your gallbladder appears to be working properly. I felt odd the rest of the day after the scan, not exactly painful, not exactly nauseated, but “off” and restless and uncomfortable. That evening, I had a mild attack with my usual epigastric and upper back cramping feeling and restlessness. That was the first time I really thought maybe my symptoms were gallbladder and not just gas.

I reported my mild attack to my gastroenterologist, and a couple days later she called back with my results. My EF was 79%, which is considered normal (but is borderline hyperkinetic; many doctors are not current on the literature and/or don’t believe that biliary hyperkinesia is a real thing). But in particular because the scan and its after effects replicated my symptoms, she recommended surgery and referred me to a surgeon.

Is surgery the only option?

At this point I was getting super stressed out. It seemed like all signs were pointing to surgery for this thing that I had thought was a non-issue and almost didn’t bother mentioning to my doctor. It seemed very drastic to remove an organ from my body when it hardly ever caused problems, and the casual way that doctors seemed to just automatically jump to surgery really bothered me. I know it is a routine surgery (more than 1 million cholecystectomy surgeries are done in the US every year), but it’s not routine for the individual having the surgery!

I started compulsively reading papers about gallbladder issues, pros and cons of surgery, alternatives to surgery, etc. I joined online communities on Reddit and Facebook to learn more about whether surgery was really the only option, what to expect if I did go ahead of surgery, etc. There is a ton of interesting and useful information out there, but the social media communities also tend to self-select for people who have more complications: people who get better tend not to stick around. So although I learned a lot I also did not help my anxiety about surgery.

The general medical consensus seems to be that since you don’t really need your gallbladder to live, removal is the best treatment option if you have symptoms. Once your body starts producing stones, it’s likely to keep doing so until you have an emergency, so it’s better to do the surgery electively than risk a necrotic gallbladder or pancreatitis and emergency surgery. There are treatments that can help to dissolve stones if they are small and non-calcified, but the impression I got is that those treatments are still usually just delaying the inevitable.

There’s also a lot of conflicting information out there about the long term effects of removal. Some sources will say that you can basically go back to normal and eat whatever you want immediately, others say that you likely will end up having to make long term changes to your diet (but because those changes tend to be toward healthier eating anyway apparently it’s all fine?). Some people suffer from long term effects such as pain, diarrhea, reflux, gas, etc. collectively called “post-cholecystectomy syndrome” but it is unclear how many of those cases are directly related to the surgery and how many are due to other issues.

A rant about medical imaging

I was wracked with indecision and decided I needed more information, so I set about trying to ask the radiologist’s office to provide me with the actual imaging and radiology reports from my ultrasound and HIDA scan so I could see for myself. (I had not yet done the upper GI x-ray because, frustratingly, the gastroenterology office referred me to a place that doesn’t do that particular imaging. We had to go back and forth several times, with them asking me why I hadn’t done the x-rays yet, and me telling them that they needed to refer me to a place that actually does the imaging they were ordering.)

Of course, the radiology office’s website was broken and they had no patient portal. I called them several times and followed their phone tree to try to request my medical records, but just got a voicemail box that never responded. Finally, I just pretended that I was trying to make an appointment until I got to a real live person, who took my request and passed it along to their medical records people.

Medical imaging is amazing. The quality of the images and the fancy tools used to analyze them are just fascinating to me as a scientist who analyzes data and writes analysis tools for a living.

Given how advanced medical imaging technology is, you can understand why I was shocked that the only way to get a digital copy of the images was on a CD. I have not had a computer with a CD drive for probably 10 years. When they handed me the CD, it had a post-it note with instructions for how to access the files using a built-in image reader on the disk. Sounds great, right? If only I had a way to read the disk…

My wife took the CD to the library, where she was able to use one of their old computers with an optical drive to copy the files over to a USB drive. With the USB in hand, I booted it up and opened the image reader. Here’s what it looked like:

Very user friendly for English speakers!

That’s right, the tool was in Japanese. Not to be deterred, I opened up Google translate on my phone to see if I could just struggle through the Japanese interface and see my darn images.

But not only was the tool in Japanese, it also could not find the images. Navigating through the disk directories on my computer, there were files there, but nothing recognizable as an image.

I almost gave up, but in my frustration I posted about this on Facebook and a friend of mine came to the rescue. She suggested that I try a free medical image reader called ONIS. Amazingly, it worked and I was able to export my images as JPGs!

It really boggles my mind that this is how medical images are shared with people. I am a scientist and I figure out how to read and work with weird data formats for a living, and I was barely able to access the images. They’re shared on obsolete physical media, with a viewer that is not in English and also does not actually work to view the images. It’s just unbelievable.

What the images showed

I was shocked when I looked at the ultrasound report and the associated images. When my GP said that I have “gallstones” I figured we were talking grains of sand. Maybe gravel-sized. I do not have “gallstones,” I have GALLSTONE. Specifically, to quote the radiology report that came with the ultrasound images, I have “a dominant 3.3 cm calcified stone within the fundus of the gallbladder”.

Recall that a normal gallbladder is only about 4 cm wide and 10 cm long. That means I have a stone that is taking up a significant portion of the volume of my gallbladder. Just take a look at this image:

There’s, uh, not a lot of room in there! Note the dark shadow behind the stone, indicating that it is reflecting all of the sound waves. I think this is how they know it is calcified. I added a picture of a US quarter for scale.

I was really struggling to wrap my head around how big a 3.3 cm stone really is, so I put together another picture, comparing a 3.3 cm circle to other familiar objects:

I still can’t believe there’s a stone this big inside me right now.
Sometimes things are easier to understand in meme form.

(As an aside, the ultrasound was a full abdominal ultrasound, so they also checked out my other organs. It’s kind of weird and neat to have pictures of my liver, kidneys, pancreas, spleen, and aorta.)

The HIDA scan results were also interesting. As I mentioned before, despite the apparently enormous gallstone, my EF was 79%. You can see in this first image how they calculated that number:

The picture on the lower left shows the area that they used to measure the signal from my gallbladder (red) and the area they used to measure the background signal (green). The graph on the right shows the gallbladder signal decreasing by 79% over a period of 15 minutes.

Here are the individual HIDA scan images. They form a time lapse showing the tracer moving from my gallbladder into the duodenum:

By comparing with the previous image, you can see that the gallbladder is the faint blob on the left hand part of the image that fades over time as the gallbladder empties. The darker blob is the tracer in the duodenum – apparently some had already left the gallbladder prior to the CCK.

The Upper GI X-Ray

I’ll just briefly talk about this because it didn’t show anything remarkable. This test’s full name is Upper GI X-ray series with air contrast and upper bowel follow-through. It has a few parts. First, you drink a barium slurry while standing up and they take x-rays, next, they lay you down and have you drink to see if your esophagus works ok without the help of gravity. (Barium is opaque to x-rays, so it lets them take pictures of soft parts of your body like your digestive system that normally wouldn’t show up in an x-ray.) Next, you swallow a mouthful of what the x-ray tech described as “super pop-rocks” (based on the taste, I think it was citric acid and baking soda). This makes bubbles in your stomach (they tell you to try not to burp) which, combined with some barium slurry in your stomach, makes it easier to see how your stomach walls are doing.

Next you have to drink a really large amount of the barium stuff. It’s thick and weird but not too bad. Then they take pictures every 15 minutes for an hour or two and watch the barium move from your stomach through your small intestine. Finally, when it has gone all the way through your small intestine, they do some final images. This last part was extra weird because the radiologist comes out with a big plastic paddle with an inflatable rubber ball on the end, and he firmly pokes and prods your abdomen while more x rays are taken. (They use the paddle so that his hands don’t have to be in the picture.)

I don’t have the images from this test yet (they’re mailing me another CD…) but they were very cool to see on the screen. Like the ultrasound, it’s just kind of neat to have pictures of my own guts and bones. The radiology report said that everything looked ok, except that my big fat gallstone showed up on the x-rays (more evidence that it is calcified). So as far as we can tell, there’s nothing else going on other than the gallbladder issues.

Another small rant

I also want to mention the astonishing lack of communication between medical offices, and with patients. I am 99% sure that my GP didn’t tell me I had an enormous gallstone because he didn’t know. My suspicion is that the radiology office just sent the written report, which was read by someone other than my GP at his office, and he was just told the diagnosis: cholelithiasis (gallstones), which he relayed to me.

When I went to the gastroenterologist, they did not have the ultrasound results. When I went to the surgeon for consultation, he did not have any of the imaging results. Each time I had to verbally describe the situation to bring them up to speed.

I also have not yet been able to be seen by my gastroenterologist’s office yet since my initial visit where they ordered the HIDA scan. First the follow up was delayed because they kept ordering the x-rays from a place that doesn’t do them. Then the follow up appointment was canceled and rescheduled twice because they kept making appointments for me to speak with someone who is not on my insurance. This last time they canceled, they tried to book me an appointment in June and I had to flat out tell them (remember, their office is the one that referred me to surgery) that I am having surgery on May 10, and that I want to talk to a gastroenterologist before I have an organ removed from my body. They are squeezing me in to see the actual doctor on May 6.

More Symptoms

Since the HIDA scan and discovering the magnitude of my gallstone, I’ve been hyper-aware of every little ache and pain and discomfort in my body. I am not sure how much is just psychosomatic and how much might be related to either the HIDA scan irritating my gallbladder, or just my condition getting worse, but I have started to notice a more persistent discomfort in the upper right quadrant.

Earlier this month we took a road trip from Arizona to Texas to see the eclipse (which was spectacular). I normally don’t have to watch my fat intake but I also don’t normally eat fast food for every meal. A couple days into the trip I had my first real attack in over a year (if you don’t count the HIDA scan). In a hotel room, trying not to wake the kids, unable to leave them alone in the room to pace around the hotel: not my preferred place to have a gallbladder attack.

I had another attack shortly after getting back from that trip, and have generally been having more symptoms since. There’s a persistent ache or feeling of pressure where my gallbladder is. Sometimes it feels more like a bruise, combined with a burning sensation like from an overworked muscle (ok, probably literally is an overused muscle). I’ve also started to feel faint discomfort in the gallbladder area if I take a really deep breath and hold it, or stretch my arms over my head.

Surgery is the right choice

All of this might sound unpleasant, and it is, but it’s also reassuring in its own way. It is a reminder that I am having surgery for a reason. Even though I usually can eat whatever I want, recent experience shows that is not always the case anymore.

I also was reminded over Christmas, as I shared the gallbladder saga so far with family, that my grandfather died of biliary cancer (I knew he had liver failure, but had not remembered that his cancer started in the biliary system.) Given that history and the fact that gallstones larger than 3 cm in particular are associated with chronic inflammation and an increased cancer risk, it makes sense to get the surgery even if I was not having other symptoms.

I still am very apprehensive about what life will be like after the surgery. I love eating fatty foods (who doesn’t) and I would hate to trade a normal life with occasional discomfort for constant bathroom issues and nothing but bland food. But I try to keep telling myself that it’s the right choice, and that very likely I’ll be back to normal, minus the cancer risk and occasional attacks.

Conclusion

So, apologies for the very long post. I hope if you’re someone who knows me that this was a useful update about what’s been going on. And if you are someone who doesn’t know me I hope this was a useful distillation of various information about gallbladder issues and treatment. I also hope this illustrates a few lessons that I have learned:

  • If you have a health issue, tell your doctor. Worst case it’s nothing, but you might find out that you have an enormous gallstone!
  • Ask for your images any time you have medical imaging (but be prepared for the CD and the weird image format)
  • Advocate for yourself and don’t assume any of your doctors will communicate with each other

I plan to write a follow up to this post some time after surgery, once I have the energy. I’m told recovery is usually 1-2 weeks, but many people feel fine within just a few days. So we will just have to see. Here’s hoping it all goes smoothly.

My Top 5 Books of 2022

Well, it is somehow another new year! Time just keeps on going, doesn’t it?

One of my favorite end-of-year activities is thinking back over all the books I read that year, and sharing my favorites with others. I read 32 books in 2022, which achieved my arbitrary Goodreads goal of 30 books. ( I thought I had just squeaked by with 30 books, but it turns out a couple of them had not been recorded as “Read” on goodreads!) Though to be fair, one of the “books” was actually a short story and another was a novella. They help balance out some of the super long books like Michener’s Alaska. According to my Year in Books, I read 12,531 pages. Not bad.

Overall I would say it was a pretty good year for books. I generally know my own tastes well enough that I don’t end up reading much that I would rate below 3 stars, but sometimes you get an unlucky run of so-so 3 star books in a row. I did have some 3 star books, but even those were mostly not bad. For example, I started reading pulpy sci-fi books set in the Battletech universe (originally developed for tabletop RPGs, later for the Mechwarrior video game series, which I love). They weren’t well-written books so I gave them 3 stars, but I sure had fun reading them (and in fact I just started another one the other day).

But let’s cut to the chase. Of the 30-ish books I read this year, what were the top 5? It’s always hard to choose, but here goes, in no particular order:

A Psalm for the Wild-Built and A Prayer for the Crown Shy by Becky Chambers

Yeah, that’s right, I am immediately going to cheat and list two books as one. But these are parts 1 and 2 of a series, they’re not very long, and they’re both great. Also, coincidentally, they pretty much bookended my year. I read Psalm in the first couple weeks of the year, and Crown Shy in the last week of the year!

Sci-fi fans love to defend the genre by talking about how the speculative framing allows more freedom to conduct thought experiments with how things could be rather than sticking to how things actually are. The problem is, most sci-fi doesn’t do this very well. Or rather, it does this but very narrowly, often focused just on fancy new technology. So you end up with “what if [insert current political conflict/war/controversial issue] but in space?” It’s inevitable, and it’s not even necessarily a bad thing, but I am always on the lookout for authors who take it a step farther and genuinely imagine alternative ways of life.

Not just “what if we had fusion reactors” or similar, but “what if society was organized in a fundamentally different way?” Ursula K LeGuin did this all the time, and it’s why her stuff is so good (it also helps that she is just an amazing writer). Kim Stanley Robinson does this, as does Ada Palmer in her Terra Ignota series. With the Monk and Robot books, Becky Chambers is doing something similar but in a particularly interesting way.

Instead of holding a mirror up to our current state of affairs, and using sci-fi to highlight all of the terrible things by placing them in an exaggerated analog of our world, Chambers recognizes that our world is so messed up that its problems are obvious. She doesn’t need to rub our noses in them and say “Wake up sheeple, look how terrible things are!” We know, and she knows that we know. Instead, she skips that part and instead imagines a world where all of those terrible things are gone. Solved. No longer problems.

This series dares to do something that is almost unheard of and imagine an actual utopia. Not “utopia, but at what costs?!” Just… utopia. A really nice place to live. A world where everyone’s needs are met, where people live sustainably, in harmony with each other and the environment. Where exploitation, unchecked growth, discrimination, inequality, even money itself, are gone.

It is hard to express the physical and emotional relief that I feel when I read these books. They are comforting and relaxing and nice. Their depiction of a warm and positive vision of how life could be is just wonderful. They don’t get into the nitty gritty of how the utopia works, or how we get there from here. They just exist to demonstrate that it is possible to imagine such a world, and show us how nice that feels. And then they ask an interesting philosophical question: In a world where everyone’s basic needs are met, what gives us purpose? What do people “need” in the broader, more philosophical sense?

These are easy, comforting reads, but they’re not just fluff. They somehow manage to be easy and comforting while confronting real existential questions and daring to imagine a better world. They’re great science fiction, and simply by imagining something better, they are an act of resistance against the problems we currently face. As LeGuin put it:

We live in capitalism. Its power seems inescapable. So did the divine right of kings. Any human power can be resisted and changed by human beings. Resistance and change often begin in art, and very often in our art, the art of words.

Ursula K LeGuin

I’ll finish with a quote from the first book:

You keep asking why your work is not enough, and I don’t know how to answer that, because it is enough to exist in the world and marvel at it. You don’t need to justify that, or earn it. You are allowed to just live.

A Psalm for the Wild-Built, Becky Chambers

The Goldfinch by Donna Tartt

I try to mix up the genres that I read, but honestly I mostly read sci-fi and fantasy of one kind or another. Partly because futuristic technology and magic are cool, but also because it’s nice to have a layer of genre to act as a shield between me and the fictional stories that I read. I find more realistic stories are generally more stressful because I know that they really could happen. (Well, at least, they’re more possible than magic spells and faster than light travel…)

I may need to re-evaluate this aversion to realistic fiction, however, because when I do read it I tend to get a lot out of it. I don’t think it’s correct to say that I “enjoy” it as much as SFF, but because it is realistic it also tends to touch on real world emotions and challenges in a way that resonates.

All of which is to say, The Goldfinch is not my normal type of book, but once I finally got around to reading it, I thought it was great. Definitely made me anxious to read about the characters making increasingly terrible decisions but it did a great job of walking the line between popular page-turner and “literary” novel. It is a long, engrossing book, and somehow makes something I have little interest in (Dutch golden age art, antique furniture, criminal enterprises that steal and/or make forgeries of those things) very interesting. The writing is often wonderful too. I found myself almost highlighting a lot of passages, but most of my actual highlights are from the very end of the book, where the author really digs into the meaning of the book’s events.

I don’t hand out 5 star ratings unless I really like a book, but between the great story and the deeper meaning, The Goldfinch gets 5 stars from me.

That life—whatever else it is—is short. That fate is cruel but maybe not random. That Nature (meaning Death) always wins but that doesn’t mean we have to bow and grovel to it. That maybe even if we’re not always so glad to be here, it’s our task to immerse ourselves anyway: wade straight through it, right through the cesspool, while keeping eyes and hearts open. And in the midst of our dying, as we rise from the organic and sink back ignominiously into the organic, it is a glory and a privilege to love what Death doesn’t touch.

The Goldfinch, Donna Tartt

How High We Go in the Dark by Sequoia Nagamatsu

Ok, back to genre. This was one where the protective layer of genre was very helpful, because even with a (fairly surreal) science fiction setting, this book was hard to read at times. How High We Go in the Dark is a series of interconnected short stories, spanning a huge range of time and space, but they are all about death. The framing event for the stories is that archaeologists digging in thawing permafrost unearth bodies from long ago that also carry a deadly virus. This virus spreads and ravages the world, and most of the stories in the book are in the aftermath of this pandemic.

One of the problems with speculative fiction is that when you try to summarize what a story is about, it can come across as silly or ridiculous, with none of the emotional weight that the story has when you read it. So with that in mind, here’s a sampling of some of the central ideas in the stories in this grim but beautiful book:

  • Hotels that have been converted into massive funeral parlors where you can rent a room to spend time with your deceased loved one while awaiting their cremation.
  • A scientist whose child has died of the plague is searching for the cure, but in the process inadvertently breeds a pig capable of speech, who he adopts as a surrogate child.
  • An employee at a euthanasia amusement park, where terminally ill children are treated to one last fun day before riding a ride that ends their lives, falls in love with one of the parents. (As a parent, this story pretty much emotionally destroyed me.)
  • An artist creates ice sculpture boats out of the remains of the dead that sail out to sea and then melt.

There are more stories but that gives you an idea. The blurbs for this book say that fans of Station Eleven and Cloud Atlas will like this, and since I loved both of those books I guess they were right. Like Cloud Atlas, the different stories are interconnected in interesting ways, and it was fun to identify these as I made my way through the book.

I think it’s a little misleading to call this a novel – it is really a story collection, and like any story collection the stories varied in how well they worked for me. But overall, I thought this book was quite good. Weird and dark and depressing, yes, but very good.

Persepolis Rising, Tiamat’s Wrath, and Leviathan Falls by James S.A. Corey

Yep, cheating again and grouping several books from a series. When you read a lot of sci-fi and fantasy, you get used to series. Long, epic stories split up into 3 books, 5 books, 10 books, sometimes even more. In certain notorious cases, these series are never finished, or must be finished posthumously by another writer. In many other cases, the first book or two are great, but things gradually get formulaic, or bloated, or weird, or otherwise lose the magic of the initial books.

I am happy to report that The Expanse series does not suffer these fates. It is a 9 book series, and it is consistently excellent, and it is complete, and the ending was good. That is… basically unheard of.

This year I read a lot of books by Daniel Abraham (one of the two authors who write under the pen name of James S.A. Corey). I read two books in the Dagger and Coin fantasy series, and three novels and a novella in the Expanse series. Apparently I like Daniel Abraham’s writing! Thinking about it, he seems to particularly specialize in characters with personalities that can be described as different variations on “world-weary snark”.

I feel confident saying that The Expanse is one of the greatest sci-fi series ever. It is not particularly “deep” – don’t go looking for a lot of symbolism or hidden meanings – but it’s a truly great story, set it a wonderfully developed science fiction universe. I particularly appreciate how, despite having plenty of things in the series that violate the laws of physics in the interest of telling a good story, those instances of rule breaking are well thought-out and limited.

I would not call The Expanse “hard” sci-fi, but I would say that it does a great job of getting the science close enough to right when it can. And more importantly, it uses the limitations of real-world physics as a driver of the story, rather than a hindrance. Stories where anything goes are often less interesting than stories where there are some constraints, and by being realistic where possible, The Expanse ends up telling some great stories. It also makes the instances where things do not follow the laws of physics much more significant, both for the reader and the characters in the story.

As an aside: I generally don’t like the distinction between “hard” and “soft” sci-fi because in certain segments of SFF fandom, “hard” sci-fi (ostensibly, sci-fi that somewhat tries to obey the laws of physics) is seen as somehow better than “soft” sci-fi (sci-fi that is less concerned with physical sciences and more interested in social sciences, philosophy, etc.). This distinction between hard and soft sci-fi is so blurry as to be meaningless and often has sexist overtones.

The worldbuilding in The Expanse is great. The geopolitics of a future where humans have spread throughout the solar system (and then beyond), the messy, complicated, diverse vision of the human future in space, is just excellent. The stars of the show are the “Belters”: humans who have grown up in the cities of the asteroid belt, who are extra tall and thin due to low gravity, who are more comfortable in a space suit than on the surface of a planet, who speak “Belter creole” – a mix of various languages that is just at the edge of comprehensible to the reader. But the other major factions (Earth, Mars, and in the later books, the Laconians) are all interesting and distinct and well done.

If you haven’t read The Expanse and are up for a long but consistently excellent series with a lot of space battles and solar system geopolitics, I highly recommend it. (The show is very good too, and relatively faithful to the books, though it stops at book 6.)

I think about all the things we could have done, all the miracles we could have achieved, if we were all just a little bit better than it turns out we are.

Leviathan Falls, James S.A. Corey

What a crew does with its rail-gun capacitor in the privacy of its own ship shouldn’t be anyone else’s business.

Leviathan Falls, James S.A. Corey

The Buried Giant by Kazuo Ishiguro

This is an odd one. It’s a fantasy novel about an elderly couple who set out on a quest to visit their son, but the whole country is afflicted with a “mist” that robs people of their memories. The couple aren’t entirely sure that they even had a son, or where he lives. They end up traveling with Wistan, a Saxon warrior, and Edwin a boy who has been shunned from his own town because he has been contaminated by a bite from an “ogre”. Along the way they meet up with Gawain, as in King Arthur’s nephew, who is now an old man, and Wistan and Gawain have an oddly tense relationship from the start.

The story unfolds slowly and carefully, and everything is suffused with an unnerving unreal quality because most of the characters have no reliable long term memories. Nothing is what it seems, and everything comes with layers of meaning that I am sure I only dimly perceived in most cases. Characters behave strangely, not trusting themselves or others. Half-forgotten arguments from long ago appear and fade, and everything has that tip-of-the-tongue can’t-quite-remember feeling to it. It is a real feat to write a story that continually teeters on the edge of reality like this, and the writing in this book is really lovely. Simple, but somehow also not simple at all. It is only toward the end after a long, slow buildup that things are really made clear, but the payoff is worth it. The final scene left me holding back tears as I listened to it while cooking dinner.

I can understand why a lot of readers, used to modern fantasy stories that are relatively fast-paced, plot-driven, and without a lot of layered meanings, might not like this book. Honestly, I would probably have had trouble with the slow pace if I had been reading instead of listening to the audiobook. But it has stuck with me in a way that most books don’t. It is a haunting book about whether it is better to remember or forget, and I highly recommend it if you’re in the mood for something a bit challenging.

“Yet are you so certain, good mistress, you wish to be free of this mist? Is it not better some things remain hidden from our minds?”
“It may be for some, father, but not for us. Axl and I wish to have again the happy moments we shared together. To be robbed of them is as if a thief came in the night and took what’s most precious from us.”
“Yet the mist covers all memories, the bad as well as the good. Isn’t that so, mistress?”
“We’ll have the bad ones come back too, even if they make us weep or shake with anger. For isn’t it the life we’ve shared?”

The Buried Giant, Kazuo Ishiguro

Honorable Mentions

So those are some of my favorite books from this year. But just as I couldn’t resist cramming more than five into my “Top 5” list, I can’t just leave it there. Here are a few more that were not in the Top 5 but which are worth mentioning:

  • The Dawn of Everything: A New History of Humanity – This was a frustrating book. It offers a novel take on world history, where humans are active, imaginative agents in our own fate rather than passively at the mercy of our environment. It advocates a view of prehistory that breaks free from modern preconceptions about how societies can be structured, and challenges a lot of the “conventional wisdom” about centralization of power and the shift toward what we call civilization. But it also very clearly does some cherry picking and has a strong bias in how it interprets history. Still, worth reading because it stirs the pot and challenges some fundamental ideas.
  • Exhalation by Ted Chiang – Excellent collection of sci-fi stories, often dealing with philosophical questions like free will, sentience of AI, etc. Very very good.
  • A Memory Called Empire by Arkady Martine – Sci-fi dripping with political intrigue, set in the capital of an interstellar empire that is strongly influenced by the Aztecs. Very different and strange but in a good way.
  • Embassytown by China Mieville – Quite possibly the weirdest sci-fi story I’ve ever read. I only gave it 3 stars because it very nearly falls apart under the weight of all its weirdness, but if you want to read something really different, worth a try. It’s fundamentally a story about how the ability to say things that aren’t true – to use metaphor – underpins all of human language and thought. But it explores this by way of an alien species that speaks with two voices at once and which can’t lie or understand lies.

Ok, I’d better stop there or I’ll just write about all 32 things I read this year. Your turn: what were your favorite books of 2022? I always like adding things to my to-read list!

Renly

I remember the day we met you. We drove a couple of hours from Ithaca to a rescue in Pennsylvania because we wanted to have a good selection of puppies to choose from. You were in a large cage with your littermates, but you looked nothing like them. A black lab mix among a bunch of Australian shepherds. They told us you were born under a porch in Kentucky. I don’t know how you ended up in that shelter in Pennsylvania, but I am glad you did. They told us that you had never really been outside before. We let you out and watched you frolic around the yard on clumsy puppy legs with the bigger puppies. You had a distinctive, playful way of running, lifting both front legs straight out in front of you, a little higher than normal. The little floppy tips of your ears bounced with every step.

We brought you home and gave you a bath and settled in to becoming a family. We learned that you love to eat woodchips, and sunglasses, and remote controls. You learned to walk on a leash, starting out with a length of yarn trailing from your collar as you explored the path behind our condo for the first time. Our very own forest to explore.

Since we didn’t have a yard of our own, you got to go on walks often. You had so much energy that we would pick a 6 foot long dry reed from the marshy drainage next to the road, and use the tassel of seeds on the end of it to go “fishing” for you, luring you to leap higher and higher after it as we walked. We called you our graceful ballerino.

It became our morning routine to go to the grassy field near our condo and play fetch. The road was higher than the field, with a grassy slope that led down to the flat area, and from the top of that hill the frisbee would fly far, and you would run in a black streak down across the field to catch it, or pounce on it in a tumble of legs, and then run it back up the hill. On autumn mornings, the whole field was frosted and the morning sun glowed on the orange and yellow of the trees, and you left long tracks in the frost. You brought the frisbee back to me, soaking wet as the frost melted on your fur, clouds puffing with every panting breath. “Throw it again dad!”

One morning, you met a group of white tailed deer on our field. The two does took off into the bushes as you approached, but when you ran (ears forward, eyes bright, playful front legs forward) toward the buck, he didn’t budge. He charged briefly at you, and you got scared and ran back to me. We joked later that you told us an embellished tale of how you had had a great adventure and you confronted a scary “dragon” and “protected” me.

Another time, it was winter and people had built snowmen on the field. You didn’t notice them at first, but when I threw the frisbee down toward them you ran after it and then stopped short, caught off guard by these strange white towers that had appeared in your field. We had to walk down among them together to show you that they were safe. When the snow got deep, you loved to bound through it like a little deer, chasing snowballs and then leaping your way back to us for the next one. Exhausted but loving every minute.

Your other favorite place was the Ithaca dog park. Big grassy fields, toys, wading pools, and lots of other dogs to play with. You were young and sleek and fast, and would race around the park with other dogs. When you got hot, you would come to the wading pools and splash down into the muddy water and dig dig dig dig dig at the bottom of the pool, splattering water everywhere. The dog park became my refuge from the stresses of graduate school. It’s hard to stay stressed in the presence of so much pure joy.

We went on adventures. You came with us when we went to the Adirondacks with a group of friends, and you and I got covered in mud when we stepped into a deep puddle hidden by leaves. You ran miles ahead on the trail with our runner friend. In the evening, you snuggled up with us on the floor of the cabin.

We took you to Michigan, where you got to enjoy the freedom of the north woods. Running for miles on the trails as we drove around on golf carts and ATVs. We tried taking you out on the kayaks and canoes, but after you fell into the lake from one of the kayaks, you were always wary of water.

At home, you had your stuffed animals that you would carry around the condo and occasionally shake like a vicious hunter. You had a rope pull toy that became absolutely disgusting but you loved it. When it finally fell apart and we had to throw it away, we joked that you called it your “childhood” (since you had had it since you were a baby puppy) and kept asking us where it went. You loved to lounge on your blankets and cushions in our wide picture window and watch the forest and bark at rabbits and deer. In the summer, we would go down the gorge behind our condo to the waterfall. When Erin and I went in the water to swim, you stood on the banks, whining, worried that we were obviously in some distress if we were out in the water.

The evening that I asked Erin to marry me, I talked to you about it first. She and I had just come back from a date and I took you outside for a short walk. I talked to you in the woods as I worked up my nerve, and then we went back inside together and we started the next chapter of our life. (You were very handsome at our wedding rehearsal picnic in your white bow tie.)

You moved with us across the country to Arizona, where we traded gorges and waterfalls for rocky ponderosa forests and sunny days. You discovered the joy of a backyard, and spent many lazy afternoons basking in the sun after playing fetch.

You joined us on adventures here too. You went with Erin to Mexico, and went camping in Utah and Sedona even though you were always a little unclear on why someone would voluntarily choose to sleep somewhere cold and uncomfortable instead of in a nice warm house. You even joined us on our memorable visit to Loy Canyon in Sedona, where you led us down a game trail and we ended up at a dead end 40 feet upslope from the real trail. You trusted us completely as we slid, scrambled, and squeezed our way down the slope and through scrub and cacti to get back on the trail. We all ended up exhausted, hot, and with more than a few cactus related injuries, but you were a trooper.

When we had to leave you at home and go to work, you cried and cried, so we finally decided to get a second pup. You helped us choose from among the puppies at the shelter, playing the best with a little fuzzy guy named Chewbacca, who we renamed Pippin when we took him home. He grew into a big floppy doofus who yanked you around on walks and shoved you aside at the door to the backyard, but you stopped crying when we left you at home because you had a friend.

All of our lives changed when Shane came home. You were a sweet big brother to Shane, greeting him for the first time with gentle sniffs and wags, and tolerating him admirably as he got bigger and more “hands on”. When we put him in a bouncer seat in the backyard while doing yard work, you would lay down next to your baby to keep him company. Then Rowan came, and you were just as sweet with him, even though you were getting older.

The last few years disappeared in a blur, and somehow gradually and then all at once you were an old dog. I wish we had played fetch a few more times before it got too hard for you to run and jump. I wish we had taken you on a few more hikes and walks before even walking became too hard.

You got sick last year and the vet expected that you had only a few months left, but you stayed with us for a whole year. I thought that extra time would help me mentally prepare to say goodbye. It didn’t. Your health finally deteriorated rapidly, and I’m sorry for the pain that you had to endure at the end. I know that it was scary and confusing for you and I hope that you were also able to take some comfort in knowing how much we loved you.

We said goodbye to you yesterday. Deciding and scheduling and then waiting for the end was one of the hardest experiences of my life. I have lost loved ones before, but every loss is a fresh grief, and I was not prepared. It is a desperate, gasping grief that comes in sudden overwhelming waves. I know it will get better with time. I know that you loved us and that we will look back fondly on all of the good memories. That doesn’t make it any easier to say goodbye.

You were our first baby. You made us a family, and were our constant, trusting, loyal companion through some of the most important years of our life. I don’t think I realized how deep our bond was until it was gone.

We will always love you, our sweet Renly pie.

“Sunsets are loved because they vanish. Flowers are loved because they go. The dogs of the field and the cats of the kitchen are loved because soon they must depart. These are not the sole reasons, but at the heart of morning welcomes and afternoon laughters is the promise of farewell. In the gray muzzle of an old dog we see goodbye. In the tired face of an old friend we read long journeys beyond returns.”

Ray Bradbury

Tour of my huge Lord of the Rings-inspired 7 Days to Die base

In my review of 7 Days to Die, I showed a couple of screenshots of the absurdly huge Lord of the Rings-inspired base that I made in my latest single player game. Now I want to spend some more time showing off the base in more detail. Probably the easiest way to do that is with a video tour:

I know that personally I don’t always want to watch a video when I can read something instead, so I’ll use the rest of this post to walk through the base in writing with lots of screenshots.

This project started out as a regular play-through, with no cheats or changed settings. However, I quickly decided I wanted to build something more creative than just a place where I could survive horde nights. I’ve always loved the epic architecture of Lord of the Rings, and so I thought it would be cool to try to build a base that borrowed from some of the coolest LOTR locations. Once I got motorized vehicles, I started exploring the game world in search of a nice mountain or cliff to use as a starting point.

An early candidate location. I really prefer the forest biome’s looks, but in the end, the desert had the best cliffs.
Gyrocopter made scouting much easier. This cliff caused by the city intersecting with a mountain was decent, but still not perfect.

I was looking for a cliff in particular because I knew I wanted to create a switchback staircase like Dunharrow in LOTR:

Finally, I discovered that the way random world generation works in this game, the steepest cliffs are always in the desert biome. After some more scouting I found a great location and started building:

The earliest screenshot I have of the base location. I’ve just started placing temporary frame blocks for the staircase.
Pretty soon I had a full set of switchbacks framed out (note how the path tunnels through a protruding part of the cliff too), along with a platform at the top and stairs up to an entrance into the mountainside.

I knew that in addition to the switchback stairs, I wanted to dig into the mountainside and create my very own Mines of Moria. I started off by digging a tunnel into the mountain for a ways, with a nice arched entrance, leading to a chokepoint:

Standing at the main entrance.
Closer view of the chokepoint. The turret up above and the doorways on either side are late additions that I’ll come back to later. For those not familiar, the striped blocks are steel, the strongest blocks you can build. I don’t know why they are stripey, I wish they weren’t. But it’s useful to have a funnel location like this reinforced so that zombies don’t destroy it.

At the chokepoint itself, I set up a series of electric fences to stun zombies and dart traps in the ceiling with pressure plated beneath, so that zombies would trigger the trap while stunned and be shot from above. I also added a shotgun turret at the end of the chokepoint so that any zombie that somehow made it through the dart traps would be shot from above by the turret:

Standing on the other end of the chokepoint, looking back toward the entrance. Shotgun turret is visible at the top, and the red cubes are the downward-pointing dart traps. The wires across the hallway are the electric fences, and you can see the pressure plat tiggers on the floor.

From the chokepoint, I decided that I wanted to re-create the famous Bridge of Khazad-dûm from Lord of the Rings. If you are less geeky than me and are wondering what the heck I’m talking about, it is the place where Gandalf fights the Balrog and says “You shall not pass!”

I unfortunately didn’t take any screenshots while digging out the chamber where I built the bridge, so I can only show off the finished product. But it was as I was digging out this chamber that I decided to make this building project a bit less tedious by cranking up my block damage to 300%, meaning that I could drill through the rocks of the mountain at 3x the speed. In the end, I made myself a nice deep pit, with a narrow, arcing bridge spanning it. I couldn’t very well summon a balrog, but to get a similar firey ambiance, I put a lot of torches and burning barrels in the pit.

Side view of Khazad Dum in its nearly-finished state. I put robotic turrets on little protrusions on either side of the bridge, The red lines are their laser sights, indicating that they are active. You can also see the steel ladders I placed so that zombies that end up in the pit can climb up to the bridge (and then get shot). At the foot of the ladders are some spinning blade traps to slice and dice zombies.
Here is a “god mode” view of the pit. This mode allows you to fly and to travel through formerly solid objects. A neat thing happens when you are inside the terrain: it disappears! Basically, the terrain is only opaque when viewed from the “outside” but if you are inside it is transparent. This is super-handy for viewing complex tunnels inside a mountain! I made liberal use of god-mode in building this base.
Standing at the end of the bridge, across from the chokepoint. The steel hatch to the left of the chokepoint provides access to the generator that powers the traps.
Looking the other way.

I returned to this pit later for some finishing touches, but for now let’s continue. From the Khazad Dum room, I dug some stairs up, doubling back to end up above the room. Here is where the digging really got serious. I wanted to re-create the huge hall in Moria filled with rank upon rank of pillars stretching off into the distance.

Alan Lee concept art of Moria.

I had learned in the process of digging out the pit for the bridge of Khazad Dum that to dig out such a huge volume block by block would take forever, even with 300% block damage. So instead I got smart. I dug around the perimeter of a huge rectangle and then undermined it so that it collapsed. The way the game physics works, if you cause a collapse, most of the blocks that are no longer supported are destroyed, and a small percentage remain as rubble which is much weaker and easier to clear.

Here are some screenshots showing the stages of digging out this huge hall. It was around this stage of the project that I also started really using “god mode” much of the time.

God mode view as I dug around the perimeter of the huge rectangle that will eventually be the great hall of Moria. The tool I’m holding is my trusty auger – in this game the auger is the ultimate digging tool, rapidly breaking through solid rock (completely unlike an actual auger, as I can attest from real-world experience…).
More progress, you can see that all sides of the rectangle are dug out now. Just need to undermine the bottom to make the whole thing fall. (Also notice that you can see the Khazad Dum room below in its unfinished state.)

The full length of the rectangular hall was too much to collapse all at once, so I split it into several chunks. Here’s a little video I recorded of the last chunk collapsing. You can see how very unrealistic the collapse is, but it’s a fast way to clear out a large volume!

At 1:28, the block starts to collapse (onto me) before I expected. Luckily, collapsing blocks don’t do too much damage!

After clearing out the space of the hall, I filled it with huge pillars to mimic Moria. I’m pretty pleased with how it came out:

Climbing the stairs into the hall.
Looking down the length of the hall.

At this point, with the hall constructed, I wanted to build a functional “residential” section of the base. When I decided to build this base, I moved all of my stuff from the original base I had been using from the start of the game, but had just been keeping it stashed in crates out front. My work stations were also just sitting out front, and I wanted to get them placed in an actual “workshop” part of the base.

I created a hallway and staircase off the end of the Moria hall, leading up to a large living space that emerges from the cliff face above the main entrance.

God-mode view of the Moria hall, Khazad Dum pit, and the beginnings of the living area.

Where the living area emerged from the cliff, I built a huge concrete “prow” sticking out in a way that was sort of reminiscent of the way the Citadel of Gondor sticks out over the walled city of Minas Tirith in LOTR:

An overhead view of the Citadel of Gondor, from Return of the King.
Note the spotlights lighting up the “prow” at night!
This is the classy living-quarters part of the base, so why not make a pretty garden and stained glass window?
View inside the stained glass area, standing by the “kitchen” area.
Here is the finished “workshop” area. Storage crates on the left. Cement mixers in the corner, workbench centered on the back wall, forges in the other back corner, and chemistry station on the right. Garage door in case I want to close off the workshop, electric light overhead, and bulletproof glass window through the natural rock wall.
“Kitchen” area, complete with mini-fridge. (I think it’s kind of hilarious that you can craft a gyrocopter and automated turrets in this game, but all cooking is done on a campfire.)

Along with the workshop and kitchen, I also made a living area. Not inspired by LOTR (though it might be fun to try a “hobbit hole” sometime), just a nice place to live, complete with bed, couch by the fire, and reading nook.

Couch and fireplace on the left, reading nook on the right.
View of the bed from the reading nook. (Stupidly, you still have to have a sleeping bag as your respawn point if you die, even if you have crafted a big bed. So you can see my bedroll by the wall.)
From the living quarters, I have a door leading to a scenic catwalk.
I put a little garden with a tree at the end of the catwalk.

I also added a spiral staircase from the residential area to the top of the mesa, where I placed a generator and solar panels. I also built a landing pad for my gyrocopter and wired it up with lights to turn on at night.

God-mode view of the residential part of the base from inside the mountain (this was before I added the tree at the end of the catwalk.
Landing pad and generator building on top of the mesa.

Once I had the residential area finished, I went back outside. I decided that I wanted to build a tower at the top of the switchback stairs that was (a) reminiscent of Orthanc, Saruman’s tower at Isengard in LOTR, and (b) also an effective horde base. As a reminder, here is what Orthanc looks like:

And here’s what I came up with. A little stubbier than Orthanc, but it gets the right “feel”:

The base of the tower is fortified to steel, and has electric fences across the 4 entrances.
I put a bunch of burning barrels at the top along with the Orthanc-like spires to make it look cool.
Looking down the ladder inside the tower. You can see the blade trap that is centered on the tower, and one of the several turrets aimed at the ladder. They do a good job of taking care of most zombies before they reach the top.
Better view of the turrets.
The tower connects to the entrance of the underground base via drawbridge, so if you are in trouble (or getting bored) during horde night, you can ditch the tower and run to the Khazad Dum room.

At this point, the base had all of the LOTR “landmarks” I wanted. I had originally thought about doing a Helm’s deep fortress, but ended up not trying to do that too. This was large enough! So my work on the base shifted to trying to improve it on horde nights. I found that the tower worked quite well, but if I camped out in the Khazad Dum room, the zombies didn’t follow the existing paths and instead tunneled through the rock to try to get to me. Their favorite paths were to tunnel just above the main entrance tunnel for some reason, or to try to break into the Moria hall. I also had screamer zombies (zombies that appear when you have been doing too much stuff in an area, such as crafting or digging, and which summon mini-hordes of other zombies) spawning around my workshop or finding their ways in to the Moria hall. So I started trying to work with the zombies, digging formalized tunnels where they had been trying to get in and feeding them toward turrets, or toward the chokepoint.

I made entrances like this at either end of the big Moria hall. Three tunnels converge in an “entryway” to the hall, with a turret looking down from above.
To handle the zombies that insisted on digging a tunnel just above my main entrance tunnel, I built a little balcony to catch them as the came down the face of the cliff. This funnels them down one of three hallways, which ended in stairs that lead to the chokepoint (both spiral stairs and stairs that converge in the middle). The two side hallways also connect to the Moria hall, so that zombies that find themselves in the Moria hall can find their way down to the chokepoint. At the bottom of the two staircases to the Moria hall, I have dart traps connected to motion sensors, so any zombie coming down the hall gets shot with darts. I also noticed that some zombies tended to just mill around the main entrance and attack the walls, so I added a machine gun turret above the chokepoint to shoot any loitering zombies and make them come in.

I found that one downside of the many entrances to the base was that if I was sitting on the bridge of Khazad Dum, a lot of the zombies got killed by the turrets at the different entrances before they could reach me. So, to at least get some idea of what was going on, I rigged motion sensors at each entrance to a set of lights in the Khazad Dum room, so that the lights would tell me where the zombies were coming in. Turns out a lot of the zombies were trying to enter through the south end of the Moria hall, and through the tunnels over the main entrance.

Finally, for no good reason other than that in LOTR the big hall with pillars is supposed to be part of a road, i.e. it is supposed to actually lead somewhere, I extended the tunnel off one end of the big Moria hall so that it came out the distant side of the mesa, and built a big arched bridge spanning the canyon there.

So there you have it! A super-detailed walkthrough of this super-huge base that I built. I’ll finish with a few parting shots showing all the crazy tunnels involved in the base, and then a video I recorded during a horde night so you can see the base in action.

Here’s what horde night looks like, starting in the tower and ending in the underground base. As a bonus, you get to see what happens when I accidentally leave the chokepoint traps active and try to run through them. Ouch…

Update: I have managed to export the base as a “prefab” that can be loaded into other people’s games so that it appears in randomly generated worlds. It doesn’t work perfectly – wiring doesn’t transfer, and I had to chop off the mesa unnaturally – but the main parts of the base are there. Check it out: https://www.nexusmods.com/7daystodie/mods/2306

Game review: 7 Days to Die

If you were to sit down and precision engineer a video game to be hopelessly addictive to me, you would probably end up with something like 7 Days to Die. It’s a strange mash-up of several different game genres – shooter, RPG, survival/crafting, tower defense, voxel-based, sandbox/open world – but somehow it not only works, it is incredibly compelling and has basically hijacked my brain for a significant chunk of the past year. Now, I’m susceptible to becoming addicted to almost any new game, but as you’ll see, this game hits a magic combination for me that takes it above and beyond.

The premise of the game is that it’s the zombie apocalypse and you wake up naked in the wilderness and have to find a way to survive. You gather resources and loot the remnants of civilization to craft clothing, weapons, and eventually build yourself a base where you can live safely and eventually thrive. You have to find food and water and clothing appropriate to the weather. And importantly you have to do all of this while not being eaten by zombies. But the core mechanic of the game is that every 7 days, there is a “blood moon” where the zombies go berserk, can find you no matter where you are hiding, and attack you in increasingly difficult waves. This weekly “horde night” gives the rest of the game an urgency: you need to repair, fortify, and improve your base in time for the next horde, because the hordes keep getting more and more powerful.

What’s really impressive is how irresistible I find the game despite the fact that it has no story whatsoever, and that it is not even a finished game – it is still technically in alpha, meaning it is actively being developed and is prone to bugs, lacking polish, and is generally rough around the edges. It was released in 2013 and is currently on its 21st alpha version, with no final release date in sight. I was hesitant to try a game that was still in alpha at first, and there have been some annoying bugs to deal with, but the benefit is that the game is constantly being improved, and that every year or so a major update is released, essentially providing a “new” game. I started playing last year on alpha 19 and enjoyed it very much (except for when a bug caused my vehicle and all of my possessions to mysteriously disappear…). Then when alpha 20 came out around Christmas time, I started a fresh game and have been thoroughly enjoying it again, appreciating all the various changes. The constant tweaking annoys some players but to me it’s kind of fascinating to watch. I am much more invested in the game because I can see it growing and changing.

It may seem weird for me to get sucked into an open world style game when in the past I have talked so much about how I like games with stories. I do think video games are a powerful medium for telling stories that only very rarely use their storytelling potential to its fullest. But a couple years ago I started to rethink that position when I got hooked on Fallout 4, and actually had a better time when I replayed it and mostly ignored the story and embraced the open world experience, the gameplay itself, and the little stories that naturally arise as you set your own goals and try to achieve them. 7 Days to Die picks up the evolution of my thoughts about games where I left off in Fallout 4, and has officially convinced me that my tastes in games are not actually what I thought, and that I’m perfectly happy without any story at all, in some cases. 

Story is one way that games can be great, and I still wish more games would invest more in good writing and storytelling, but it is not the only way. Games can also be great through compelling gameplay that puts you into a “flow” state where all other thoughts fall away and you know what to do, how to do it, and are enjoying the process of doing it (a combination that can be sorely lacking in real life…). 7 Days to Die definitely achieves this. It has that “let me just do this one more thing” feel to it that characterizes the most addictive games.

Games also can be great by just providing a rich secondary world for you to have interesting experiences in. That’s what I most enjoyed in Fallout 4, and the even greater freedom in 7 Days has been a blast. 

7 Days to Die is a voxel-based game, meaning that the whole game world is based on discrete blocks that you can destroy or build upon however you want. Minecraft is the most well-known voxel game, and makes very little attempt at looking pretty. 7 Days to Die actually manages to look good much of the time, in comparison. The game world is based on 1 meter blocks, but it does a lot of clever things to make this less glaringly obvious. The a20 update significantly improved the random world generation. While it’s still not without bugs (notably, water in the game is a mess, and you can end up with roads cutting across lakes making it look like Moses has been through recently), it generates some pretty believable terrain and cities, which with vegetation, weather, and lighting effects, can be downright scenic. Most importantly, it generates worlds that seem to cry out to be explored. That distant mountain? Not only can you go climb it, you can dig a tunnel right through it, or build a castle on top of it, or carve your initials into it. That distant city? Full of zombies but also potential resources to salvage.

My first glimpse of the new and improved cities in Alpha 20.
Not bad looking considering you can modify everything you see.

7 Days to Die actually has a lot in common with Fallout 4. It is set in a post-apocalyptic world where you have to loot ruins to find weapons and supplies. You level up as you play and gain more skills so you can become more powerful and craft better gear. On the hardest difficulty in Fallout 4 you have to find food and water and avoid disease, all of which are a core part of 7 Days to Die. Fallout 4 is definitely a far more “polished” game, with a great user interface, tons of actual quests with actual storylines and non-player characters. It’s also much prettier because it is not voxel-based. And in both games you can build a base. I enjoyed this in Fallout 4, but it didn’t really serve a very vital purpose, it was more just a cool thing you could do if you wanted. In 7 Days to Die, building yourself the ultimate base (in a game world that is completely modifiable by you – or destructible by the zombies trying to get to you…) is an absolute blast.

When I was a kid, I built a lot of forts. Snowy outside? Build a snow fort. Rainy day? Build a pillow fort. Got some legos? Build a fort. My dad built me a wooden fort in the basement. In high school, when left unsupervised in the north woods of Michigan, a friend and I scavenged materials from an abandoned hunting shack and built a fort. We cut (most of) our timber by hand using a dull hatchet, and even attempted a makeshift forge using a cinder block as furnace and anvil (turns out that, when heated, aluminum curtain rods just flake and crumble and cannot, in fact, be hammered into swords). We made an arsenal of wooden swords, staves, and bows instead. It was never quite clear who we were defending against, but there’s something about building a safe place for yourself and your friends that I apparently find really fun.

Yes, that’s correct, one of my fondest memories from my teens involves harvesting resources, looting ruined buildings for supplies, crafting weapons, and building a fort in the wilderness. I told you, 7 Days to Die is practically laser-targeted to make my brain happy.

In my latest playthrough, after surviving for a while as usual, I decided to get creative. I scouted around until I found the perfect location for an enormous Lord of the Rings-inspired base carved into the mountainside. To avoid disrupting this post with dozens of screenshots I’ll make a separate post to show it off, but here’s a taste.

Sunset over my epic base, complete with Orthanc-like tower.
My own personal, hand-crafted Mines of Moria. Now there’s an eye-opener and no mistake.

Another reason this game was particularly ideal for me is that I love the post-apocalyptic genre. I don’t know what this says about me, that I enjoy thinking about scenarios where the world falls into ruin and almost everyone dies and I need to repurpose the tools in the hardware store into weapons, but the genre’s popularity suggests that I’m not alone. If I had to guess, I would say it’s probably a symptom of the overwhelming complexity of the modern world. I think many of us sometimes wish we could strip that all away, and imagine what it would take to survive. 

We fundamentally have the same brains that our ancestors had 40,000 years ago, and those brains evolved to help us survive in a hostile world, creating tools from the materials we can find around us to provide shelter, food, and defense for ourselves and a small group of kin. It’s not surprising that a genre that considers a return to that sort of life might be appealing.

As an aside, one thing I dislike about the post-apocalyptic genre is the assumption that with the collapse of civilization, people will degenerate into roving bands of maniacs. Actual evidence from disasters shows that the much more likely outcome is that the apocalypse would shatter social and class barriers and that, at least at first, people would work together to help each other survive. (Check out A Paradise Built in Hell for more on this.) I’d love to see more in the genre that explores that perspective, rather than the common assumption that we’re all a bunch of murderers and rapists under a thin veneer of civilization.

The nice thing about a zombie apocalypse is that it gives you a convenient “other” to defend against, while sidestepping some of the interesting but messy questions that can be explored in the genre. Zombies = bad. No negotiating, no moral grey areas. Those are good for thoughtful stories, but if you are more concerned with gameplay, defending against mindless zombies makes for a very fun game. If the last few years have taught me anything, it is that sometimes you just need dumb fun.

The final thing I’ll mention about the game is that it can be played as a cooperative multiplayer game. It’s actually how I first came across it. I have a weekly video game night with my brother and friend from high school (the same friend I built that fort in the woods with) and we came across it while looking for a new game to play together. It’s a fun single player game, but building and surviving with friends makes it even better.

Looking down at the entrance to our cooperative game base. On horde night zombies follow the easiest path to you, but they are dumb so they don’t avoid things like giant spinning blades…

7 Days to Die is by no means a perfect game. It’s still in development, it has a mediocre user interface, occasional bugs, and if you’re used to cutting edge graphics it’s voxel nature will leave you disappointed. It can have the feel of a game designed by and for adolescent boys, with its “busty nurse” shopkeeper and often crude humor. It completely lacks anything like a story.

But it is incredibly fun. It combines what works from multiple game genres into a seriously addictive, creative, and amazingly flexible gaming experience. And it has cooperative multiplayer so you can do it all with friends. I have found myself pouring hour after hour into it and thinking about it nearly constantly. I wake up in the middle of the night with ideas for how to improve my base, either practically or aesthetically. I am finally reaching the point where I feel “done” with my single player game, but I’m still having a blast in multiplayer, and am still eagerly watching the development notes for the next version. I have no doubt that when alpha 21 is released, I’ll be sucked right back in.

Talking to Myself About Writing

Me: “It sure has been a long time since you wrote anything. What happened?”

Also me: “Well, you know. It’s hard to find time.”

“Oh really? Seems like you’ve found a lot of time to play video games in the last… What has it been, 9 months since your last blog post? And another 4 before that?”

“You know it’s different with writing. You need a decent block of time to really get into it.”

“Yeah, I seem to recall saying that before about gaming too though. You claim to want to be a writer but when push comes to shove, you make time for video games but not something that is supposedly very important to you. What gives?

“Well, video games are easier right? You play a video game to mentally relax. And they’re all about guaranteed competence. You know that if you keep playing, you’ll get better and more powerful and eventually you’ll win.”

“You do realize that if you wrote regularly you’d get better at that also, right?”

“Yes, but it’s hard.”

“What’s hard about it? Just put the words on the page.”

“It’s easy to put words on the page, but it’s hard to do it well.”

“Who cares if you do it well?”

“I do. I have these ideas in my head, and when they’re there they seem so great, but the moment I try to put them on the page, I realize that they’re not as good as they seemed.”

“But once they’re one the page, then you can make them better. If they’re just rattling around in your head you can’t see where they need to be improved.”

“Yeah, I know, but it’s also scary.”

“What is scary about writing? It’s not like someone is making you do it and they’re going to punish you if you don’t do it well. You’re not being graded. You don’t even have to show it to anyone until you’re ready. Or at all! You can write stuff down and not show it to anyone!”

“I know. But I build these ideas up in my head so much that it’s hard to finally see their flaws when I write them down. One of the main reasons I want to write is to get some part of myself out of my head and into the world. So when I build these ideas up in my head, they get tangled up in my sense of self and self-worth. It’s a lot more pressure when the words that I’m dumping on the page are in some way a part of me.”

“So you’re scared to work on writing that you find important or meaningful, because if it ends up not as good as you hoped, then in some way, you’ve immortalized that you yourself are not as good as you hoped.”

“Yeah. That’s why for a long time I was just doing blog posts here. Blog posts are lower-stress. I especially liked writing reviews of things because I could just jot down my opinions and move on. Not a lot of self-worth caught up in my opinion of the latest video game or TV show or whatever.”

“But you basically stopped writing here on the blog too…”

“Well, toward the end of 2020 I started writing a follow-up to my previous two very personal and philosophical “Finding Balance” posts, trying to figure out the extent to which I actually believe in all the nice things in those posts, and how much of it was trying to justify not working as hard. But that grew into a whole series of posts trying to pin down my own personal understanding of the meaning of life, and whether I am living the values that I claim to believe in. And it got to the point where working on those posts would often ruin my mood and send me into an existential crisis.”

“Sounds like they stopped being low-stakes blog posts and became something very personal, and therefore scary to work on.”

“Yeah. I still want to finish them, but it’s daunting. And it’s not like I have new insights. People are probably better off just reading Sartre.”

“Well, but the point is to get your personal take on these big philosophical questions. But if it’s hard to make progress on this project, take a break and write something else. You have other ideas.”

“Yeah, there’s a novel idea and a nonfiction book idea that have been rattling around in my head for years, but working on a “real” book project seems even more daunting than the philosophical blog posts. It’s much longer, much more work and then when all the work is done I know that I might face rejection trying to get it published anywhere. I have made small starts on both ideas, but never got very far. The self-doubt just kills all motivation.”

“Yeah, I get that. But let’s look at this rationally. What is the worst case scenario if you write?”

“I guess the worst case would be I spend a bunch of time on something that turns out not to be any good, and it doesn’t get published. It’ll feel like I wasted my time and I’ll be embarrassed by how it turned out.”

“And what’s the worst case scenario if you don’t write?”

“I’ll be disappointed in myself for not achieving one of my life goals. I’ll never know if I could’ve gotten something published. My thoughts and ideas will be stuck in my head.”

“The con for writing is interesting: You’ll feel like you wasted your time if what you write isn’t any good, but you’ll at least have something to show for it. Which is more of a waste of time, writing something that ends up not getting published or is not as good as you hoped, or spending that time passively consuming media with no end result to show for it?”

“I mean obviously writing is better. But it doesn’t change that it’s hard and scary and hard to get started and stick with it.”

“So how do we get over it and write anyway?”

“Momentum helps. I should try to write as often as I can. And probably need to get away from the idea that writing can only be done in big chunks. Little bits here and there can add up.”

“And lower the stakes. Everything you write doesn’t have to be the last or most important thing that you write. Especially on a first draft, you know it’s more about getting the words written so that you have something to edit. Writing the first draft is creating the lump of clay, not the finished statue. Nobody just sits down and writes a finished novel in one go.”

“Yeah, I know.”

“And the best way to do good creative work is to do a lot of it. Instead of agonizing over one thing, write ten things instead. Maybe nine are crap but one might be great, and you can’t really know until you do it.”

“Yeah, I recall a quote along those lines. Something about how it’s not the writer’s job to judge what they write, it is their job to write it. But I can’t find it.”

“Oh well. There’s always this one. Seems like a good place to end this post. Let’s write.”

Nobody tells this to people who are beginners, I wish someone told me. All of us who do creative work, we get into it because we have good taste. But there is this gap. For the first couple years you make stuff, it’s just not that good. It’s trying to be good, it has potential, but it’s not. But your taste, the thing that got you into the game, is still killer. And your taste is why your work disappoints you. A lot of people never get past this phase, they quit. Most people I know who do interesting, creative work went through years of this. We know our work doesn’t have this special thing that we want it to have. We all go through this. And if you are just starting out or you are still in this phase, you gotta know its normal and the most important thing you can do is do a lot of work. Put yourself on a deadline so that every week you will finish one story. It is only by going through a volume of work that you will close that gap, and your work will be as good as your ambitions. And I took longer to figure out how to do this than anyone I’ve ever met. It’s gonna take awhile. It’s normal to take awhile. You’ve just gotta fight your way through.

Ira Glass

AGU 2021: Initial Major Element Quantification Using SuperCam Laser Induced Breakdown Spectroscopy

The virtual poster interface for the AGU fall meeting leaves something to be desired, so I thought it might be worth posting the contents of my poster here, where it is easy to access and share.

Audio recording walking through the poster.
Figure 1: Distribution of compositions in the laboratory spectral library. Orange bars represent the Training set, Green bars represent the test set.
Figure 2: (Left) All library points (grey dots) projected onto the first two PCs with selected sample types denoted by a range of colors and symbols (see legend). The dashed line represents the convex hull of all the library points. (Right) Same data without the SCCTs highlighted. Approximate groupings of samples are shown by shaded regions.
Figure 3: Test set predictions for the selected multivariate models. Perfect results would fall on the line.
ElementRMSEP wt.%Model
SiO26.1Average (GBR, PLS)
TiO20.3RF
Al2O31.8Average
FeOT3.1GBR
MgO1.1GBR
CaO1.3Blend RF+PLS
Na2O0.5Blend GBR+LASSO
K2O0.6LASSO
Summary of 3 m test set RMSEPs and selected models.
Figure 4: Histograms of Mars predictions through Sol 239 for each major element.
Figure 5: PCA plot of Mars spectra with convex hull of laboratory data superimposed (dashed line). Most Mars data plot within the space spanned by the lab data. Points that plot outside are indicated in red.
Figure 6: Local RMSEP indicates how accuracy is estimated to vary with predicted composition. Black points are the unsmoothed values calculated using the nearest 60 test set predictions. Blue curves show the result of smoothing and extrapolating.

The Most Important Thing in the Universe

One of the side effects of studying science is an appreciation for how insignificant humans are in the scheme of things. It is pounded into your head at every opportunity. We are microscopic compared to the Earth, and Earth is not the center of the solar system. Our solar system is one of billions in our galaxy. Our galaxy is to the universe as grains of sand are to the beach. The universe is unfathomably old, and the Earth has been around for a good chunk of that time but humanity is brand new. In Sagan’s famous cosmic calendar analogy, in which the age of the universe is compressed down to a single year, humans don’t appear until minutes before midnight on December 31. On the scale of the universe in both space and time, humans might as well not exist. 

Apart from a thin film of life at the very surface of the Earth, an occasional intrepid spacecraft, and some radio static, our impact on the Universe is nil. It knows nothing of us.

Carl Sagan

This is all true, and it’s important to teach people, especially people who plan to make it their business to study the universe. You need to face reality even when it makes you uncomfortable.

However, it’s a little alarming how gleefully some people like to drive this point home. There’s a sense of smug superiority, a feeling of being somehow above the petty things that concern “ordinary” people. I find this is especially true of certain fields (you get this much more from the physical sciences than biological and social sciences) and certain types of people (especially those who think they have something to prove). 

As I have gotten older, I’ve started to realize that despite good intentions, this “minimize humanity” mindset leads to its own flavor of wrong-headed thinking. People begin to mistake feeling smart for being wise. 

The test of a first-rate intelligence is the ability to hold two opposed ideas in the mind at the same time, and still retain the ability to function. 

F. Scott Fitzgerald

This is one of those cases that Fitzgerald is talking about. Humans are indeed insignificant in both space and time when compared to the universe. But at the same time, we are far more important to each other than the distant reaches of space and time. Both of these things can be true. “Meaning” or “significance” are not laws of physics, they are human constructs. We as humans get to decide what is significant, and the scale of the universe is not the appropriate comparison. Our lives occur on the time scale of decades, and on the spatial scale of a tiny fraction of the surface of the Earth. So what if that’s small compared to the universe? It’s big for us.

Minimizing humanity might help avoid mistakes like saying that the sun goes around the Earth, or that we are at the center of the universe since most galaxies are flying away from ours. But it can also lead to dangerous reasoning like: If humans are insignificant, then how can we be responsible for climate change? Even if you accept that there are enough of us that collectively our actions are significant enough to mess up the planet, it can lead to a nihilistic view that it doesn’t matter. After all, we’re just a flash in the pan. Earth will survive whatever we do. Some species might go extinct with us, but others will adapt and flourish. So who cares? The sun will eventually become a red giant and consume the Earth, and the universe will eventually succumb to entropy. On the scale of the universe nothing matters, everything is insignificant and transient. So if nothing matters why should I care about anyone other than myself and my immediate gratification? A brief bit of hedonism before I return to the nothingness from whence I came. 

Of course, that’s a cop out. An avoidance of the uncomfortable responsibility of deciding for ourselves what is meaningful. It’s easier to throw our hands up and say “well, nothing matters.”

LIfe has no meaning a priori. Before you come alive, life is nothing; it’s up to you to give it a meaning, and value is nothing else but the meaning you give.

Jean-Paul Sartre

Man is condemned to be free; because once thrown into the world, he is responsible for everything he does.

Jean-Paul Sartre

This minimization of Earth and of humanity also can trick otherwise smart people into fixating on the wonders of the universe and neglecting the wonders around them. I have been somewhat guilty of this. I was fascinated by science from an early age, and started studying space right when I got to college. I thought I had a pretty good understanding and appreciation for “mundane” stuff and was more interested in the exciting weirdness of the rest of the universe. But of course, I knew almost nothing about life, and now as I get older and have more life experience, I have come full circle: I feel less drawn than I used to be to the mysteries of space which have no bearing on human life, and am more interested in the richness of regular everyday life.

My point is not that we should not marvel at the universe, my point is that, in looking up at the stars we must try not to devalue the wonders that are right in front of us.  The things that matter and can bring us real happiness are right here on Earth. 

Think of your own life. All the memories and experiences that are stored in your brain. All the relationships, all the places you’ve been, all the things you’ve done. Think of your proudest moments, your greatest disappointments, your loves and your losses. Think of the things you have created, the mark you have made on the world, whatever forms that takes. Just take a moment to recognize the richness of your life and everything you know and have done. These things don’t lose their significance because the universe is vast and ancient. The universe doesn’t get to decide what is significant to you. You do. 

Now consider: there are 7.9 billion other people on this planet. If you looked at one face every second it would take 250 years to look at everyone (and in that time, billions more would be born). Every two years, humanity’s collective experience spans more time than the age of the universe. That’s a lot of people. And what really boggles the mind is that every single one of them has just as rich and vivid and intricate a life as yours. Every one of them has their own favorite places and favorite foods, their own family, their own memories. Every person has things they have created, songs they have sung, dreams they have pursued. Every person has their own story. 

Every place and every thing in the world plays a role in countless people’s stories, and has a story of its own. That big tree in the park is just a tree to you, but to someone it’s where they shared a sunny afternoon with their first love. To someone else it is where they were sitting when the doctor called with bad news. To someone else, it’s where they take their family photo every year.

I think about this a lot when traveling or looking at a map: every place that you see is someone’s home. Every house, apartment, street or park, is at the center of someone’s whole life. When you really think about this and stop relegating these things to mere scenery, the world feels anything but small. 

It feels even larger when you fold in time as well. Consider not just the significance to people alive today, but the countless lives going back tens of thousands of years. We hear so much about how all of human history is the blink of an eye in geologic or cosmic time, but at the human scale, our history is almost unimaginably deep. We’ve been here long enough for every single patch of the earth’s surface to be rich with human history. Most of it forgotten, but all of it real. 

Lately I’ve gotten much more interested in history, especially ancient history and prehistory for this reason. Just as it is eye opening to think of all the places you visit on vacation as someone’s home, it fires my imagination to consider people as real and complex as you and me living thousands or tens of thousands of years ago. Real people peering out over the wilderness of an uninhabited continent, or cautiously trading with tribes of Neanderthals, or waging a forgotten war on the ground we walk every day, or struggling with the timeless day to day tasks of raising a family. I feel the depth of history stretching out into the past, at once unreachable but intimate in our shared humanity. 

I came across this on my social media feeds after I had written this blog post.

Yes, we humans are insignificant on a cosmic scale, but so what? We don’t live on that scale, we live on a human scale. Nihilism is a cop-out. We are responsible for deciding what is significant and meaningful, and as anyone who has held a newborn can tell you, it has nothing to do with size or age. You can hold the most important thing in the universe in your arms.

For small creatures such as we, the vastness is only bearable through love.

Carl Sagan

Poem: Hourglass Planet

I’m trying to get back into writing somewhat regularly, and I noticed some friends on Twitter posting using the hashtag #NaPoWriMo – National Poem Writing Month. Apparently it is the poetry equivalent of NaNoWriMo (Nationak Novel Writing Month), and you’re supposed to write one poem per day for the month of April. I’m not going to be able to keep up that pace, but I thought I might try my hand at some poetry. Poems are usually pretty bite-sized, and you’re actually supposed to agonize over every single word so my over-editing habits that slow me down for longer writing may actually be a good thing!

This first poem is inspired by this audio recording returned to Earth by Perseverance. Turn up the volume and listen to the sound of wind on Mars.

Hearing that recording got me thinking about how quiet Mars is. On the whole planet, the only things making any appreciable noise are Curiosity and Perseverance. Everywhere else it’s just the wind occasionally moving sand or dislodging a pebble or rock.

So without further ado, here’s the poem:

Hourglass Planet
Soft wind traces the faces of the rocks
And the world sounds like a held breath.

In that patient silence could you listen?

Sigh of wind 
hiss of sand
a pebble falls.

tick

Or would you need to make noise?
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